Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Alpha Prime
Earth's Alpha Prime
MN_1223
Chapter comments61
The story become too generic. RPG type. that’s terrible, youngsters don’t get that RPG games with their statistics and stuff try to emulate real world and put it infront of you easy to understand, but are limited by the technology to emulate it perfectly. “System” novels are moving the opposite direction, away from realism and towards computer game. I bet you (the author) are RPG fan, which is good, but have you played great RPG games or have you played popular one only, do you understand the underline meaning of those games. Try playing few “dungeons and dragons” tabletop games, then play “d&d” PC game and then listen to some d&d story in youtube. Compare what you see in the three instances and understand the whole meaning of RPG and how a story should be told. Also stats definition in this part are clear and yet terrible, inspire yourself from games and their stats - games like d&d, fallout (the RPG parts), kingdom come deliverance and others. Try to put them in a real life scenario, how would you numerically describe a different persons with those systems - strong man contestant, proffesional athlete and as example Bear Grills. Gaining stats should be observed and advised by the system, not awarded by it. Otherwise this shows that the system can alter reality. If so why does it need a host, just alter everything it wishes and get to it’s goal, novel is meaningless in that case.
J'aime beaucoup le roman ! Mais je trouve que le protagoniste s'adapte beaucoup beaucoup trop vite à ce qui lui arrive alors que 20 min avant il était dans sa cuisine en train de se dire "c'est quoi cette barre de notification ???" Et la juste comme ça il tue un gobelin, un gobelin les gens 😭 mais sinon continuez ce que vous faite vraiment je trouve que l'arrière plan est super!
That ability of his is OP as ****. I'm glad I found this novel, somewhat rational mc with on the move thinking skills and an OP ability, as long as you write it well this could become a really good novel. I just hope you dont try to underscore the mc's strength and nerf him or go down the stupid face slapping young master route (I'm a bit paranoid about the last on) this site has scarred me to many times...
