Coffee_Fox
Hi, This is Tiffany, an editor from another platform that focuses on LGBT Fictions.One of my colleagues happened to read your book a week ago, then recommended it to me. As a reader, I have to say that your book was really a page-turner. You are so talented that I admire you very much. So I send this message to ask whether you are willing to distribute your work on our platform. we will be devoted to getting your work more exposures and promotion! We would rather invite you to write on our website as a professional writer. If you are interested, please contact me via tiffanylala2020@outlook.com, or leave me your email for communication. I am glad to discuss it with you in detail. Sincerely Tiffany
I couldn't make it through the first chapter of this web novel because the writing quality is so bad. Each paragraph is a single run on sentence. I have never seen so many commas in my life. There are nonrestrictive clauses and appositives within each other to the point where it's impossible to know what's actually being described once you get to the end of the 10+ line sentence. The adjectives the writer uses make no sense and very much sound like they were haphazardly picked out of a thesaurus. Even though it was only chapter 1 and it was so difficult to read I could tell there was a good amount of character building and the plot would likely be interesting... But I just couldn't struggle through the horrible writing to enjoy it.