Comments of chapter undefined of Demons Creed
Demons Creed
AlphaPokemon
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nitraMLv4nitraM
a nice small happy village and happy family, nothing will go wrong, how could it!?(did you really have to do it so heavily (not saying that it's bad tho)) this also is a good first chapter, alot of personality, good job!
AlphaPokemonAuthorAlphaPokemon
I tried not to do it so heavily but my aim was to impact the MC more rather then audience. The audience already knows something's up but the MC does not so I built up the villages happiness and complacency despite the readers feeling how obvious it all was. I do hope you enjoyed the read as I means a lot đ
