Multiverse Hopping

story is really good but grammar and sentence structure is killing me. still gonna read it but I hope that in future story will get proper editting

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

honest? you should study english and rewrite this whole cancer to the eyes. insaw that almost 70% (about 30) of the reviews are from the SAME dude giving 5 stars and full of emoticons and all others would be on average 2 stars.

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Sinceramente ? Ótima idéia, execução horrível. Gramática horrível, mc horrível, estúpido. Pq diabos ele conta q é um reencarnado ? Pq ele se preocupa com oq vai acontecer no mundo se ele, com 7 anos, já é forte pra porra ? N tem sentido nenhum. Ele com logia n pode ser danificado sem haki e ngm nesse mundo usa haki. Não tem lógica e foi mt mal executado.

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I saw a 5 star novel and thought that this must be amazing if so many people liked it but no the MC is mentally unstable......................

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yes so far quite entertaining because it gives 5 stars, just continue your work writer. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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You obliviously don't know how to talk or write in any language. Just run on sentence after run on sentence. A paragraph is meant to be made out of several sentences not 1 sentence for each paragraph. Also some words aren't used right but that doesn't bother me to much. I made it about half way through chapter 1 and saw maybe 2 periods. Btw should rename story Devil FruitS User in the Multiverse. To many fruits.

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