Comments of chapter undefined of Hyde, Worldwalker Reborn

I am very confused, I mean I can't tell when it is internal monologue talking to a system or some other person with your / and // marks. If you can add something in the begining explaining this it would be very helpful.

strange concept...I like it.

nice

It's pretty good so far. Very interesting

thanks for this first chapter, boss

I am interested it seems to be the idiotic kind of comedy which is my favorite

map of the world

Thx

Thank you

Perfect point. It is meant to be the internal conversation since italics doesn't transfer over, and since they will be the only two in the discussion, I will put a note at the top of the first chapter. Thank you for the feedback.

so this is a harem novel where the mc has a male spirit/god observing everything he does including being intimate with his harem and giving him advice?yeah this seems kinda creepy as well as a borderline voyeurism or Exhibitionist fetish so I'm glad you made it clear from the start what this is so i don't waste anymore time on it.

let see

xp

poor Gripton 🥲

Question for the author : how difficult is it to write like that ?

MC has a ‘strong’ personality... but he seems exceedingly rash and I can’t say I feel any relative connection with him, no kinship due to similar circumstances. He shows constant disregard for consequences, an emotionally apathetic... borderline sociopathic attitude and a tendency towards endless chatter. I can’t seem to envision myself in the position of the MC, which means I probably won’t be able to get the vicarious thrill associated with it.🤷🏻‍♂️ 👍🍀 & Bon voyage

The mc remminds me to a old friend with the dame personality , somebody try yo steal hombro and he end in a chair with unfuctional llega😡😟😕just Bad luck in life😟

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