I'm tired of reading your life expectancy. This chapter was unnecessarily lengthy, I hope I don't have to read the life of a beggar again. The writing is good, but the character is terrible, not necessarily because he is useless, but because he is stupidly unpleasant. Although it's a little pitiful in the end, you ruined it completely with the appearance of god, you could simply reincarnate him and give him good luck, instead you used the greatest narrative resource of this place. The story is not necessarily bad, you simply used all the narrative resources that I hate xD Thank you for the chapter
What you have to understand is that there is nothing wrong with what you had written, everyone has their own tastes, but those readers on this website. Many of them only care about ***, alphas, power and nothing else. They don't care about a story, but only thrills, like attaining many women or getting superpowers out of know where. Don't write to them. Write for yourself and what makes you happy and cry. After all the people who read are only here to entertain themselves. They don't really care about the story, only what they want to see. Don't let others project themselves on what you want to write. I still like this chapter though. I just wished he never met God.
somewhere out there, this kind of people is also exist. the mc is wrong but the parents is also wrong. there is always a way out. if and if the parent can ask help or guide mc to turn his hoby to be become an income source (like gamer or streamer or cosplayer or cover OST or fanfic writer) well, the hardest and simplest first must do to solve a problem is a little courage, dare to face it or not?
Man i liked the beginning, but i have one question the mc will be kind of dumb, cause ok you don't like to study, but your family is passing by a crysis and you don't even even work or study, it's a little mtf of your part, what do you think author? I'm not criticizing you, i'm just putting myself in the mc's place. Thanks for chapter.