Comments of chapter undefined of Young Justice: Riptide

I'm not saying it is bad and I'm not trying to be mean in any way this comment is purely intended as constructive criticism Author you need to give the reader a reason to care for at least a single person in the story, I feel nothing that would cause me atleast to actually care about the MC Sympathy for the MC doesn't count as caring nor does hate of others for what they did to the MC Right now I hate some people in the story, don't have any connections to people in the story and the MC has nothing to do with the story really it is all about what others are doing which further distances the reader from the MC Usually I like to give ideas or suggestions with the criticism but I don't have any idea that I really liked in my mind so please just think about my comments If anyone who actually read my comment has any idea please give advice it can help this author if he/she needs inspiration and could help others that happens to see it " no matter how wise a person if they don't pass on their knowledge and understanding their wisdom is just going to feed the land " (switched out and toned down the darker side of this quote)

dude i don't know if I keep reading or not cuz the only thing I understand is that he will continue to be screwed up by fate like in his first life and now in his second one

thanks for the chapter. Really... sorry buddy but this makes no sense how anyone can think he did it only makes them seem too stupid to be real even in a fantasy world(waiting to se how you go about this)

I like the story so far author but could you dive more into the mc not just tge people around him i do like the sTory so gar i really do just dive more into the mc instead of the people around him!

so the first ever atlantean/ xeberian si/oc story we get and this is how it turn out......i dont know what to say

if these is villan story or hero no idea it is like a sycophant story

sorry but its just to much angst just thrown one thing after another at the mc cant enjoy these types of storys. best of luck with the rest.

kill him already

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thanks for the chapter

I like the story so far as a Good starting point, i guess you can say it builds character to be put down so hard. but i dont think people like reading about feeble MCs without it at least looking like it will get better or change soon, like maybe mera coming back last second and saving the day or something maybe even with a curr?

trash

Really enjoy what you have so far can't wait to see where the intrigue will go

The mc sucks, he terrible this story is filled with angst and i frel no reason to care for the mc

hope he becomes a villain you didn't put a tag for it so i can only hope,