Comments of chapter undefined of Daily Life Trapped in a Zombie VR Game
Daily Life Trapped in a Zombie VR Game
Anotoki
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You check 'theanneleen' review yet ?, and have you go back to edit this early chapter ? I also recommend check this post on royalroad 'Reviews Explained' for some idea about POV and other aspect most new author don't notice of, it include some good explain about certain common grammar problem And finally for the grammar problem, here is a copy of my about it and some good free tool: _ 15 Grammar Mistakes That Make You Look Silly (on 9gag, pretty good explain and example, not too long) _ Have you checked two of this yet? it surely helps deal some of your common grammar mistakes here that you didn't notice it Grammarly* (it an add-on for chrome, which can quickly point out where you do wrong and auto fix it if you hover on it and chose the solution, it not 100% good but still good enough for a quick check ) hemingwayapp (The color table on the right told you what problem with that paragraph, why and maybe a word that can be replaced by hover your mouse on it and chose it, so it more clearer, clean and shorter there, you can begin use by deleting all text in the middle) Aside from that, here is more tools for spelling, grammar, and editing: Grammarly* (Most recommended) [reverso][languagetool][hemingwayapp][onlinecorrection] Bing (comparing with google translate the bing is better. Edit note: this tips was in 2018, so not sure if google better now or not) Plume Editor (somewhat professional editor, there you can write some background and other scenes so you don't forget) prowritingaid (best editing machine, of course, it still have a downside, you should google for pros and cons, despite it not free, it still allow to test and correct, just no copy all the stuff that it corrected after that, so you have to check the result it show then write over to your note again, at least better than not allow to use at all ) _ Advice for which program to help correct grammar (from other comment I copy): +If you're doing it all yourself, you should definitely switch to Google Docs, which allows some grammar-specific plugins that don't care how long the document is (LanguageTool's Grammar and Spell Checker lets you select part of the document to test, Sapling Grammar Check runs through small sections at a time as it moves through the document; both of these are online tools). The real advantage is in the future when you have actual human proofreaders, you can give them access in Suggestion Mode, and approve or ignore their suggested edits. BEFORE it goes live. It's also much easier for proofers to make suggestions on the document itself than it is to copy-paste errors. IF correct grammar is a priority, this is the toolset I recommend. +I was using Gdocs for the a while before then switched to word because it found more errors +The advantage of Gdocs is definitely NOT the tools it comes with, but what it allows you to do with external help (outisde tools, human help). p/s: Check youtube video "Ultimate Tank Ammo guide" from HowToPlay1337 (simple, easy to understand with his demonstration, short, some operational principle of it can be used for some magic attack like earth + fire here, if you do have that stuff :v, though I also guess they may have tank/cannon or similar later ?. Oh and in the past war thunder are quite realistic and give good idea about military tank/plane, but now it a hot trash with greedy/lazy dev =.=!)
