Reviews of Hunter X Hunter - The Unknown Fate

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Only read the first 5 chapters , The grammer is pretty bad ,even if a story is great but poor grammer spoils the immersibilty of that story , sorry but will not be able to get into it

allthough the mc is allright the grammer is bad and theres no backstory for the mc and how the poeple of the hunter organisation act is just wrong. the author also uses to much inner monoluge ro explain things it the chapters are also to short woud not recomend this

Good short chapters, but you have to read ten chapters to understand something. The progress is very slow for 70 short chapters, so I don't see the point in completing the reading and I know that MC will not reach anywhere mentioned in these few short chapters. The writer explains to us marital and romantic relationships for people other than MC Whoever doesn't have any relationships, this is the biggest mistake any writer can make

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I don't usually review stuff b ut damn this won got me too bad am too poor to give money or power stars[img=faceslap][img=update].God damn give us mooooooooreee

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Muito bom espero muiyo dessa estoria pois nao nos trata como burros eu estava com medo do protagonista ficar com a vadia que salvo ele. Pois ela tem namorado mas tava meio que afim do