Raeven_Black
This is just a start of the story for god's sake. Let the story take its pace first. it's in developing phase, how can everyone be so impatient and judging when the girl has just surprisingly came into a novel world? Rather than thinking from your perspective or what you want, try to think from a characters perspective for a moment. Then everything will look fine. Just give some time to a story and it will be amazing as I can see. Ps. Author, you're doing great. keep going. đ„đ€