Comments of chapter undefined of Avatar The Last Airbender: Cold Paths

yeah.......i didn't especially like that.....i mean, he basically is doing this for her concern but i still don't like it, would have been better with the taking her anger to tantrum like a man, then trying to find a way to mend their relationship, as cringy as that sounds

He should have taken her beatings like a man so that she can vent and then after her calming down had a talk azula is azula 'because' of all the messed up shit that's happened to her the story would be better if he helped her get better as cringy as it sounds its better character development this is like Mc : hmmm I don't like her personality so let's brainwash and get a clean slate Azula : ooh thnx ur the best bf

Vaatu and Akira were not the only ones in the decision making progress. That all the reason i cant give without spoiling

why tf people here saying" he should have let her beat him" wtf is wrong with you, no one wants to feel burns of 3rd degree and that would be so out of his character if he did that

Reality of war I suppose. As uncle Iroh would say (at least I hope so) "The thing that hurts us the most is not strength, but emotion".

I respect you, I really do, but this development is really poorly made. From a reader standpoint what I don't want is memories being tamper with, because it is the easy way and ruins the little plot that could have been made and character development that Azula could have. Now you just mindwipe and boom: New character from start (I suppose) Really dissapointing. I could be wrong, or people will disagree with me, at the end of the day, this is just my opinion but let me tell you, this is a downgrade to my enjoyment of your Avatar novel.

okay I have been here since day 1 and this story just keeps getting worse. Author you take no advice from readers to improve the story or characters. How are you supposed to become a better writer if you don't listen to feedback? Here is a sleepy puppy

I guess her mind protection kicked in a denied everything, poor broken girl, what is more sad, the real world is just as cruel to some

Well this was extremely disappointing, might as well kill her at this point.

hate. this is what I feel about knowing how the protagonist chose the easy way, and because of his indecision, he will practically make her a puppet(in my opinion, if someone takes away all their memories in order to "start over" for me it is almost the same as killing the person mentioned.)

Sorry no stone for ya today. Not in agreement with this chapter, lets see what you come up with for next one.

Seems like Akira took the easy way out without really thinking about how to help her or even trying to help her for that matter.

On one hand I understand what the MC wants to do. But on the other, I find he is going a little to far in trying to preserve the twisted bond he had with her. From the get go the relationship was doom for failure sadly. I can't be sure what I've would've pick in his place. I like to think I would've done like many have said, take it like a man. Still the fact that he cared deeply for her was clouding any impartial judgement he had for her, don't forget once Azula learn the truth. She didn't stop at only directing her rage at him, but toward his new foster familly. Leaving her alone in her emotional turmoil to plot from the shadows he couldn't risk it. So hence the brainwashing, all so that he could hopefully offer her a fresh start in a new life. This of course is the major moral dilemma everyone is feeling not so hot about. So as I said before personally I really don't know what I would do in the MC place. Im just glade I can read from a distance, without having to make such a crappy choices. Love the story, keep it up.

On one hand I understand what the MC wants to do. But on the other, I find he is going a little to far in trying to preserve the twisted bond he had with her. From the get go the relationship was doom for failure sadly. I can't be sure what I've would've pick in his place. I like to think I would've done like many have said, take it like a man. Still the fact that he cared deeply for her was clouding any impartial judgement he had for her, don't forget once Azula learn the truth. She didn't stop at only directing her rage at him, but toward his new foster familly. Leaving her alone in her emotional turmoil to plot from the shadows he couldn't risk it. So hence the brainwashing, all so that he could hopefully offer her a fresh start in a new life. This of course is the major moral dilemma everyone is feeling not so hot about. So as I said before personally I really don't know what I would do in the MC place. Im just glade I can read from a distance, without having to make such a crappy choices. Love the story, keep it up.

Thanks again for another awesome chapter and great as always i love the story please keep it up and stay healthy

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He should have let azula beat him or maybe beat her in secluded place Or maybe he should have told her earlier. This is very cliche, anyway thanks for the chapter

i really like the fact you have taken this kind of approach for the girl most of the other fanfics i read are always trying to show how much of a misunderstood innocent fragil girl azula is and how much you should cuddle her this kind of character is much more realistic according the the main story . . . keep up the good work i like your writings very much👍

you just choose to lobotomized your mc girlfriend instead of just dominating her to submission to show who is the real dragon among the two

Oh this is GOOD!!!. I can't help but get excited on who the third party is.