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It's fine as long as you describe how they feel in their povđđ Thank you so much for the chapter..
I've been thinking about the eventual separation of Azula of her relationship with her father. You gave the MC a month, in convincing Azula from turning away from years of brainwashing twisted sense of false love from her father. That isn't much time for the MC to change such deeply wired belief in Azula. Unless a major event happen that will turn everything she believe in upside down. Honestly, I have no clue on how you will reach this point in a month. One point that come to mind on Azula loosing her sense of reality, was when her friends turn on her. That was a major blow since it broke what she had come to believe was solid. Not because she cared for them in a girls are for ever sense, no because she believe that their fear of her was big enough in insuring their loyalty. My best guess is that the author is planing something similar, only replacing the sense of betrayal and fear, with a sense of love and acceptance. Still its a large pill to shallow for Azula, turning on her father before he turns on her. That going to be a huge conflict, let not forget the whole him being the dark avatar. Something that the fire lord will never accept, since his very existence is a possible future threat to his rule. Thanks for the story I'm really enjoying it.