Comments of chapter undefined of Fantastic Life Tycoon

Eddies name switch to king

Thx for the chap

Hooray, Betty now a total bitch? It's seems everyone now psyhos? Is it good... I don't know.

can someone tell me what is benjamin packet ? slang ?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Thanks for the chapter

This became a bit confusing.. Someone please tell me if king and Bryan are same or two different characters. Or athey just 2 different personalities within one body?? And did Betty had a cousin in the previous one (I don't think so).

The previous guy, on top of going back in time, had the system to buy advanced stuff. The advanced stuff already negate half of the appeal of backward time travel. Here, on top of that, you add an entire foreign lifetime that would dictate how the protagonist act. He was already supposed to learn from his past experience, but you made that previous experience irrelevant. At that point you should have just made the king transmigrate into a dead-by-overdose student in another world with a system. Also, I don’t get why you want to focus on his first important product being these f*cking pillows, when he should be able to make a software 5 years ahead of anything on the market. And again with the pill that force smut. I thought you wanted things to be more logical?

It's still a little confusing, but considering it's still the beginning it's okay

Thanks for the chapter

was there a need to change in book , that was going fine .

wait... so who was who talking to who in the last chapter? I'm severely confused.

Eh, I guess it's fine. I mean you cramped down a lot to make it faster trough beggining. I could understand this. And at least you established his character. Kinda, sorta. I'm not sure. Just give it comedy tag, should work.

quite different from the other, ngl like the first one better so far, but its still early. the loss of the harem tag kinda sad(I rlly hate unrequited love ptsd from anime).