Comments of chapter undefined of Fantastic Life Tycoon
Fantastic Life Tycoon
Bad_Road
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Hello mister author ive read and like the other version while this one has very good plot for mystery stuff and explain things that are not on the previous one i find this one confusing maybe because the parenthesis is used mainly for system stuff and the inner thought is ittalasize.maybe because youre not very comfortable in the change of writing style.it like you are writing this while assuming the people that is reading this already read the previous version Anyway i still liking what happeningso keep it upđđ
I will make in some edits in the starting 6 chapters. it was all together different at the start and had to change it so it's not properly synced. just read on, its similar after 10-15 chapters. Also, only contracted authors can use italics or bold letters. I can't. [ ] are inner dialogue. what the character is thinking. in the last version I didn't put the brackets and used italics which didn't show up on thisapp
