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short story. good language. read if you have nothing to read. short story. good language. read if you have nothing to read. short story. good language. read if you have nothing to read. short story. good language. read if you have nothing to read.

It’s a good story, if short. I’d score it higher but the story didn’t have the room to grow with character development and other pieces. The world building was pretty decent but it left something to be desired, which again was due to how short the story itself is. Will we be seeing anything more of Kent Granger?

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It’s good, atleast better than most of the others I’ve read. It also Doesn’t feel to Bad and has a good flow in it. it shows MC abilities to a good point. and The characters only Go differt time to time. So good fic hope to have moar*

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Right now the story looks very promising. I will update the review in the future. Until now it's a nice fic with a good pace. Keep up the good work!

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* I usually don't like mcs who share their powers, but in fact I liked this novel because despite being a little naive he is cautious *

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So far so good. It is interesting to see which direction you will take with the siblings and if they can keep working together. Logically the power creep should be quite fast now that he has access to the Hogwarts library so please don't limit/never him.

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Pretty good OC/SI Harry Potter FanFiction. Nevertheless The beginning is always easy to write because the plot is still not clear. Just visualise the direction you want the story to take and it will be good.