Comments of chapter undefined of D & O System

Instead of the copy-pasting you should have skipped the parts or not mentioning it too much

man that was a whole lotta copy paste

why gryffindor? i hoped he'd be different and not go to that and go somewhere like ravenclaw where he can abuse the sh1t out of his library

Oh i wanted it to be ravenclaw

yes, no senseless drama with shorting hat!

I feel like the OC is just a fly on the wall. And I also feel this will be dropped soon.

That's why I posted the chapter next day. It doesn't require much work to copy and paste and a bit of edit.

A chapter with little content 😔

This chapter..meh do a mass release not any was than 10 chapters

only good for first 5 chapter, turn out be good but his choice action was bad after that become bad to worse,,,

Thanks

Good Story!! But I feel that brother and sister bond should be strengthened a bit. Hermione feels too distant with her brother.

Oh mx

I liked this chapter. It is understandable that you used most of the official plot for this.

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the update

Thanks for the chapter~~😄👍

MAWR