Comments of chapter undefined of D & O System

D & O System

Mike_Lu

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oceansageLv4oceansage

Since when occlumency is helpful in acting?🤦

3yr

oceansageLv4oceansage

Thanks for replying

Mike_Lu:Consider the MC human, who cannot always keep an eye on Hermione and not very observant at that time. And a bit of spoiler: There will be explanation for many small things that I intentionally left. Some of which you will find around ch 15 or 16.

3yr

DevilslayerLv6Devilslayer

Wow !! Its getting more Complicated ... for now the mc is at disadvantage

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ComTolManBoePyaJhuLv6ComTolManBoePyaJhu

like I said, loser in previous life always be loser in future life~ 30 years old boy not a guy but a boy plus naive and beta male characters ≈ DOOM~

3yr

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SondreLv13Sondre

really good twist, I expected it, but it was beautifully executed. Very well done.

3yr

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Red_RomanLv12Red_Roman

I should have stopped reading at last chapter...good luck with your novel tho

3yr

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LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter

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OverkillLv14Overkill

this actually is MC fault... he know there a way to fking read mind and he had not devise a defend again it!

3yr

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Book_EaterLv11Book_Eater

So far so good. Thank you.

3yr

WeirdoLv6Weirdo

D@Mn, what a plot twist.. Hope Hermione wouldnt getvso paranoid that he invade her own brother brain..

3yr

SepoysBreezeLv5SepoysBreeze

next thing you do is to make all horcruxes has voldy memories from future lol

3yr

FlowingRocksLv4FlowingRocks

I was right nice

3yr