Comments of chapter undefined of D & O System

D & O System

Mike_Lu

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oceansageLv4oceansage

Since when occlumency is helpful in acting?🤦

3yr

oceansageLv4oceansage

I know I'm nitpicking and I'm sorry for that. But assuming occlumency work that way and Hermione died from death eaters attack, then she shouldn't has such proficiency in it to not make a mistake atleast once. And how much dumb can mc be to not even consider her reincarnation?

Mike_Lu:Just like Snape got the trust of Voldemort. He could control his emotions, induce false memories and adjust his personality likewise.

3yr

DevilslayerLv6Devilslayer

Wow !! Its getting more Complicated ... for now the mc is at disadvantage

3yr

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ComTolManBoePyaJhuLv6ComTolManBoePyaJhu

like I said, loser in previous life always be loser in future life~ 30 years old boy not a guy but a boy plus naive and beta male characters ≈ DOOM~

3yr

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SondreLv13Sondre

really good twist, I expected it, but it was beautifully executed. Very well done.

3yr

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Red_RomanLv12Red_Roman

I should have stopped reading at last chapter...good luck with your novel tho

3yr

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LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter

3yr

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OverkillLv14Overkill

this actually is MC fault... he know there a way to fking read mind and he had not devise a defend again it!

3yr

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Book_EaterLv11Book_Eater

So far so good. Thank you.

3yr

WeirdoLv6Weirdo

D@Mn, what a plot twist.. Hope Hermione wouldnt getvso paranoid that he invade her own brother brain..

3yr

SepoysBreezeLv5SepoysBreeze

next thing you do is to make all horcruxes has voldy memories from future lol

3yr

FlowingRocksLv4FlowingRocks

I was right nice

3yr