DanteMustDie
I wish I was a fly on the wall when the Hyuugas hear about Hinata fighting against Raikage. Surely Kumo will put Sasuke and Hinata in the bingo books, as S-rank wanted. The Hyuugas have never produced S-class ninja. The maximum they have reached have been A-rank jounin like Neji but they have never broken through the S rank so it would be interesting to know their thoughts and especially the thoughts of the elders of the Hyuuga clan, the same ones who wanted to discard Hinata in favor of Hanabi as clan leader. I wonder if after Sasuke acquires the Rinnegan, they will travel to the moon for Hinata to get the Tensiegan. I like your Hinata. I wonder if she'll get the Yuki bloodline, considering Hinata already knows how to use the wind too.
I'll be honest here and tell you my opinion. if I'm correct kaguya bloodline + hyuga bloodline = Hamura Otsutsuki bloodline. then senju bloodline + uchiha bloodline = Hagoromo Otsutsuki Bloodline. if he and hinata did this they'll be 50% Otsutsuki which is a huge advantage. then combine the two bloodline they will both be pure Otsutsuki and when the time comes for the boruto arc (if you wanna do it) they can totally consume other Otsutsuki that will come and upgrade their power and bloodline further. if sasuke got the senju bloodline i hope he'll take the uzumaki bloodline too, karin 3 kekkei genkai was op she was just dumb. senju and uzumaki bloodline is compatible anyway . btw the uzumaki kekkei genkai if im correct is the healing bite, eye of kagura and adamantine sealing chain. karin is the only uzumaki i know that inherit all three.
It's too soon to review but if I should I would have given 3 đ. Besides your ATTEMPT at building romance which concluded as a disaster, this is a good work. I'm slightly surprised that Orochimaru didn't put a seal on Hinata but not a great problem. Now what about Kabuto? Did he learn medical Jutsu as Karin isn't there anymore? On the Scroll of Forbidden Techniques, didn't he find the Eight Gates and Tsunade seal? Is he still contracted to Manda? If I could make a suggestion, make it such that Hanabi died at birth along her mother which would explain Hinata detachment about her family. So I assume he just gained the sage Chakra, no need for Snake Senjutsu then? Or wouldn't he be able to access Six Paths Senjutsu? Does Hinata get a summon? If not I would suggest reverse summoning toward a kind of bird or butterfly. As she like 3D mobility. If you want to give her Tenseigan afterwards, experimenting on the Otsusuki could be the way to go. Otherwise she won't be able to keep up with Sasuke (Rinne-sharingan and all that). About meeting Itachi, I hope it's for his eyes and not some nonsensical revenge? When the time comes, don't let Juubi go. Maybe destroy its consciousness and make it less ugly. It is a great supply of chakra after all. That's about it for now.