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Comments of chapter undefined of A Sasuke with Control

Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

VINCI88
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I wish I was a fly on the wall when the Hyuugas hear about Hinata fighting against Raikage. Surely Kumo will put Sasuke and Hinata in the bingo books, as S-rank wanted. The Hyuugas have never produced S-class ninja. The maximum they have reached have been A-rank jounin like Neji but they have never broken through the S rank so it would be interesting to know their thoughts and especially the thoughts of the elders of the Hyuuga clan, the same ones who wanted to discard Hinata in favor of Hanabi as clan leader. I wonder if after Sasuke acquires the Rinnegan, they will travel to the moon for Hinata to get the Tensiegan. I like your Hinata. I wonder if she'll get the Yuki bloodline, considering Hinata already knows how to use the wind too.

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Bogg_Dann
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Why is he waiting until he confronts itachi? I really hope there wont be some emotional bullshit with him or trying to save him or whatever.

DiegoBrando
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2 chapter’s in one day

MinMinOppa
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I'll be honest here and tell you my opinion. if I'm correct kaguya bloodline + hyuga bloodline = Hamura Otsutsuki bloodline. then senju bloodline + uchiha bloodline = Hagoromo Otsutsuki Bloodline. if he and hinata did this they'll be 50% Otsutsuki which is a huge advantage. then combine the two bloodline they will both be pure Otsutsuki and when the time comes for the boruto arc (if you wanna do it) they can totally consume other Otsutsuki that will come and upgrade their power and bloodline further. if sasuke got the senju bloodline i hope he'll take the uzumaki bloodline too, karin 3 kekkei genkai was op she was just dumb. senju and uzumaki bloodline is compatible anyway . btw the uzumaki kekkei genkai if im correct is the healing bite, eye of kagura and adamantine sealing chain. karin is the only uzumaki i know that inherit all three.

Wolfboy123r
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This is the best narito fanfic with sasuke as mc and the sasuke and hinata is the best possible couple in naruto cant wait to see what happens Please dont drop

DataMonarch
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This Hinata is like the one from the alternate reality naruto movie.

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Goodread
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Are you going to turn this novel into a Harem?

Evil_For_the_WIN
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It's too soon to review but if I should I would have given 3 🌟. Besides your ATTEMPT at building romance which concluded as a disaster, this is a good work. I'm slightly surprised that Orochimaru didn't put a seal on Hinata but not a great problem. Now what about Kabuto? Did he learn medical Jutsu as Karin isn't there anymore? On the Scroll of Forbidden Techniques, didn't he find the Eight Gates and Tsunade seal? Is he still contracted to Manda? If I could make a suggestion, make it such that Hanabi died at birth along her mother which would explain Hinata detachment about her family. So I assume he just gained the sage Chakra, no need for Snake Senjutsu then? Or wouldn't he be able to access Six Paths Senjutsu? Does Hinata get a summon? If not I would suggest reverse summoning toward a kind of bird or butterfly. As she like 3D mobility. If you want to give her Tenseigan afterwards, experimenting on the Otsusuki could be the way to go. Otherwise she won't be able to keep up with Sasuke (Rinne-sharingan and all that). About meeting Itachi, I hope it's for his eyes and not some nonsensical revenge? When the time comes, don't let Juubi go. Maybe destroy its consciousness and make it less ugly. It is a great supply of chakra after all. That's about it for now.

ExaltedCrow
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Man I’m so happy you chise Hinata. Haven’t started reading yet, but was gonna ask if it was harem, because mot people only include Hinata if it’s a harem. Can’t live without Hinata in naruto fic

Iskandir
IskandirLv6Iskandir

Thanks for the chapter. What's he going to do about Danzo?

KingofThingz
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This is my favorite fanfic on this site please keep updating as often as possible

0dinson
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Shocked that Hinata doesn't have a grudge against Kumo for trying to kidnap her tbh. Wouldn't the Kaguya bloodline be suited for Hinata too? It'd make her Taijutsu even more deadly.

Tipsy_Dice
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Im gonna stop reading this for a few weeks because i came in with the expectation that sasuke was gonna be different, not most of the characters. I think if I come back later I can trick my brain into not thinking about it because i actually like this story.

TheScarletKing2799
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If his body turns into amaterasu flames it would be awesome.

syedsaid95
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thx 4 the chap

_Elysium_
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Does anyone know any stories like this? But with a lot more chapters? please hit me up with the name

18Dragon
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Is he going to take Hinata to the moon to get the tenseigan somehow or increase her power

luis5224
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Will he still form a team like in canon? If so, will he recruit the original members or will they be different? By the way, I personally think it would be good if you have him recruit Karin as she would be a good team member!!

Weesy_Kd
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I love this novel so far đŸ‘đŸ»đŸ‘đŸż

RamenGuy
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Great chapter