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Comments of chapter undefined of A Sasuke with Control

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LMaltez
LMaltezLv4LMaltez

Frankly, the MC is rather boring... He is too bland... I can understand him wanting to become stronger but there isn't much point in doing it at the moment because with his control over his body and the chakra control it gives him he can become awesome too fast and considering that chakra is made from physical energy and spiritual energy he can get the physical aspect of it rather fast too and he just needs to study, meditate and accumulate experience for the spiritual part so its not truly a problem (though unless he can go over the genetic limit he has with his powers he wont have that much) as the spiritual part can perhaps be cultivated using Shadow Clones if used properly and if he gets enough knowledge any problem of assimilating huge amount of information because of them can be removed so I cannot help but wonder why MC is even thinking like he is as he does seems to want to go with Orochimaru for his knowledge that while great would make him hunted down and its not like Orochimaru would share anything too important either so its not really anything good while Sasuke could potentially get much more secret information in Konoha if he does things right... He seems to be more like a machine which has only one objective in mind and that's frankly not good as the character you choose is certainly lacking in character so far (I doubt he would reject so much to have friendship or some type of bond with anyone else considering the memories he got it should have affected him more than it did).....

TotalHaze
TotalHazeLv13TotalHaze

Well the whole willingly letting orochi put his soul in you with the curse mark seems kinda dumb unless he is 100%sure he can get rid of it completly unlike in the anime where itachi had to help even after sasuke won the strugle. And why would he want to go after itachi and not danzo now that he knows the truth? I do uderstand that he wouldnt want to be friends with anyone in konoha tho. They are all pretty dumb...maybe anko and him could work out lol

DanteMustDie:Orochimaru has probably the most expansive knowledge on ninjutsu in the world. Alongside that, he has a plan for when he tries to take him over that is based on his control of his body. As for him seeming like a drone, that's the point at the moment. I don't think he would really get close to anyone in Konoha. Naruto and Sakura are both out, one's a fangirl and the other gets on his nerves. Ino is the same as Sakura, Kiba is the same as Naruto. Shikamaru is a potential friend, which I might look into. Choji just doesn't fit well to me, Shino is much the same. Hinata is too shy and he wouldn't put effort in to try to bring her out of her shell. Konoha doesn't fit so I wanted to use Taka to really start his relationship development and the fight with Itachi as character development.
So_Aap_Jay
So_Aap_JayLv5So_Aap_Jay

MC feels a bit to empty like he just doesn't care about anything.

NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv13NewGoldie

everything is kinda force even when Killing other person drama, like its cringe as fUck. I see the point showing humanity but that just to force, even you say is character development; when your MC character is not even developed wtf.

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Ezukejyll
EzukejyllLv6Ezukejyll

He should have taken the Kubikiribocho and maybe sealed it away so he has a bargaining for Kiri later on.... Still nice chapter and thank you.

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timursgimranovs
timursgimranovsLv11timursgimranovs

Aren't you going to fast? Please read the novel "Naruto is Reincarnated". Best example of how it should be like in my opinion!

luckyjustinecabel
luckyjustinecabelLv14luckyjustinecabel

He didnt took the blade from Zabusa?

darkcat
darkcatLv4darkcat

thanks for the chapter

Bogg_Dann
Bogg_DannLv4Bogg_Dann

This is my favorite out of your novels so far, please continue writing it.

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

MC is empty and just like emo Sasuke but he doesn’t care about anything then what's the need of getting stronger.Also MC didn’t change anything other than getting stronger and learning more techniques,his reincarnation is irrelevent.

Kido_TO
Kido_TOLv4Kido_TO

Even if I killed someone or had my first kill in ths world or shinobi world, I wouldn't even feel a bit of any urge to puke, so stupid!!!! I'm dissapointed by this author. Those who even have a urge to puke at their first kill symbolise a weak soul. In my expectation this reincarnated Sasukr should've had strong soul and strong soul are indifferent to whhatever first kill it is.

ExaltedCrow
ExaltedCrowLv13ExaltedCrow

People cry when mc is beta. people cry when mc is alpha. people cry when mc is bland. people cry xxxxx They always have something to complain about😂

Amir_Blumenfeld
Amir_BlumenfeldLv4Amir_Blumenfeld

did he not take zabuza's sword?

Goodread
GoodreadLv4Goodread

More

8buddha
8buddhaLv48buddha

more.... more.... more plsssssss

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Smurfclassic
SmurfclassicLv5Smurfclassic

Have oroci soul in curse make broken down and mined for memories that are useful using body control skill

TheScarletKing2799
TheScarletKing2799Lv2TheScarletKing2799

Thanks for the chapter.

Smiluuu_beu
Smiluuu_beuLv10Smiluuu_beu

thanks for the chapter

degermon
degermonLv6degermon

Thanks

Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15Gh0st00

why doni have the feeling your gonna make the mc cold blooded

FraulC
FraulCLv14FraulC

Thanks for the chapter