It's such a good start, and I hope there is so much more to come! I cannot wait to see the development and learn more about the background of where she lives! Amazing depth of emotion and description.
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I ****en love your writing style (forgive me for swearing lol), the storyline to is very uncommon and there were hardly punctuation or grammatical errors. Good job!!!!
So far so good, it's a different type of narration. The plot is different. The story holds the potential and substance, depends on the author for the future plot. All the best author. Keep up the good work
Dear author, I just wanted to Say that I find your book interesting! Just by the title, it already caught my attention! Then I started reading! It’s really good!