Mike_Kochis
No!!! Do not change the writing style!!! The silent majority - at least in part - continue reading because of the way you write! And it would change how the story speaks to you, which in turn could add another negative modifier to your Authorial Motivation score!!
Write how you want, I have been here since pretty early and I've enjoyed the book quite a lot. As long as you are writing in a way that makes you happy is what matters. I'll support you and this book no matter what though so just do what you really wanna do. Also I love that little runt, I hope we get to see her again.