Death in Remnant

Really good fanfiction but can you stop focusing on the other horsemen so much.

This has got to be one of my favorite RWBY+crossover fan fictions out there no jokes. I haven't seen anything like it anywhere else, and what's been created here is something I will cherish and enjoy for a long time to come. Now, let's get on with the review. THERE ARE **MINOR** SPOILERS, SO READ AT YOUR OWN DISCRETION [Writing Quality]: Though at the start the writing quality is a bit off, through the chapters it actually gets better. The structure gets better, the grammar gets better and the entire chapters start to become smoother and smoother as they go. So I'm a happy reader, seeing an amazing story get improvements. Author-san, thanks a lot and keep it up!! [Stability of Updates]: I'm not gonna lie, I never care about update stability, I'll give it a five anyways since I believe this story deserves a five fûcking star review. [Story Development]: The story development is beautifully done, with the point of view changes happening quite regularly, you'd think it'd be a broken and confusing development, but that couldn't be further from the truth. You get to know each of our four main characters as the story progresses, you get to understand their feelings and how their personalities work, and you get to follow them as they all encounter important characters of the original story and somehow go about saving them. You get to witness something you ever rarely see on this site, the smooth weaving of many characters' lives. I love this novel. [Character design]: I very much enjoyed the character design for this novel's characters. Not only for our main characters but also for the canon characters, specifically the canon characters though as they're very well written out and still feel like they're well fleshed out. They act like you'd think they would, they have the same personality as they do in the show with the exception of those who's paths were drastically changed. But even then, when you think it through, they do still act in character, or at least to me they do. Cinder still feels like Cinder even though she isn't a psychopathic power hungry killer, albeit still strong willed and eager to prove her strength, through small details like these, the characters that have changed paths still feel like they are acting the way they should. Well done!! [World Background]: Not much to say on this, it's fleshed out properly with added details when the plot demands it. Over all it's another aspect of this novel that's been well done. Highly recommend this to anyone who's a fan of RWBY!!

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One of the best written stories so far, all the cuts from angles/view points are smooth and contribute to the story. The writer has a firm grasp on the english language, the grammar is impeccable.

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this fanfic is Really good it is in my top 10 still updating FanfictIons. HehshhsbebhsnendndnnenejejdjdndndndndndnndndndndnJne RNdndjdjdndhrbhrbbd

Early review so changes may occur quickly. Although the tag has op mc it would be appreciated if it is done well, an mc who just blows through everything will become boring fast but one who struggles and then becomes op is much better and not just in an instant. So far the concept of the story is well done but character portrayal needs work. Just accepting ghat nephilim exist in this world is not normal mind set, but interaction and progress are well done and overall there hasn't been any rushing which is appreciated since slow pace stories tend to be more interesting and allow more time for character development. So far this story gets 4☆ on concept alone.

I’m sure it’s a good story but harem isn’t good at all on webnovel, I’m gonna give a 4.2 star but character design is a 0 for the harem :/ cya

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This is just my opinion, I do not tell the author to do this, as the story follows it is entirely up to him: I liked the concept of the fan-fic, the horsemen of the apocalypse in the multiverse, but honestly? putting Harem was a bad idea, it would be much more interesting to focus on a story of action and evolution, for example, it would be interesting to mix a little of the 2 worlds, for example, demonic invasions in the world of Remnant, and he and the knights would have to defeat both Grimm and demons, and honestly, I’m not much against harem, but in this fan-fic, I didn’t like it, in this fan-fic I think it would be much better to focus on character development in terms of the knight and the multiverses, I could without a problem having one or two love interests, after all he is a child and grew up, it is normal to have love interests, but a harem of this size ... I can't quite describe it, I just didn't like the harem in this RWBY and Darksiders fan-fic.

Overall a good story that I would recommend to others. The only problems with the story is a lack of character development where from what I have read, the main character is pretty much an idiot (which could be blamed on his young age) while the siblings have completely different personalities compared to their Darksiders counterparts (explanations for the actions they take would be helpful in understanding them more).