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Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of Civilizations

ChocolatChan
ChocolatChanLv11ChocolatChan

If you want, I can be your editor-ish. Though I don't have the best grammar, I do know some grammar rules to at least flow more easier.

RedeyeRanger_268
RedeyeRanger_268Lv1RedeyeRanger_268

There are many capitalization and punctuation errors in just the first chapter. I hope this story's grammar improves

jffgrd
jffgrdLv1jffgrd

Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing