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zetsu can literally infiltrate konoha and kill or kidnap his loved one or threaten him and use him like he used madara. hope he wont tell tsunade or anyome for that matter about the sharingan. and he should definitely shut up about the uchiha clan shit and investigate it first. because obviously the elders will deny them doing that and he can get arrested for slandering them of betrayal and tsunade won't believe it coz her teacher was the hokage at that time. i'm so annoyed but i understand, mc is just a stupid little kid that got lucky with the system without it he will be just a basic cannon fodder ninja that got brainwashed and will readily sacrifice himself for konoha and die on his first mission or the suna invasion. m(_ _)m
really, these comments never cease to amaze me at how idiotic they can be. calling nerf when the cooldown is a canonical penalty to using the ability. and he didn't even know about susanoo so he would have never used it anyway. now he does know about it and can start using it when people that actually require that level of ability start to show up after the time skip.
I'm not saying he has to leave or destroy the village. I'm saying he has to develop his own thinking. In 70 chapters we have seen how he was pushed to do everything he was told. He does not think he acts only in the interests of the village. The good of the village before its own good. I hope he develops his own mind and starts thinking a bit more for himself by not putting the village first. Not like naruto throughout the anime
oh I forgot to mention one thing in my previous comment.YHE AUTHOR FCKED UP BIG THIS TIME. HE ONLY MADE MC COMMAND HIM NOT SET FOOT IN KONOHA NOTHING ELSE THAT MEANS TOBI REMEMBERS GOING TO KONOHA TO MEET MC AND THIS BEING UNABLE TO ENTER KONOHA IS BECAUSE OF MC. LOL THE MC WILL BECOME A SUPER HIGH PRIORITY KILL/CAPTURE TARGET IF HE ISN'T ALREADY ONE BECAUSE OF WHAT HE DID TO KISAME đ¤Łđ GOOD LUCK AUTHOR LETS SEE YOU BULLSHIZ YOUR WAY OUT OF THAT đ
I don't know why every writer of fanfics like to pack all sort of unique abilities into their OC. yet somehow they are still weaker than the main characters. The title of your novel is the The System: CIVILLIAN Shinobi keyword CIVILLIAN. In my view you should have made the system make all clan doujustu and kenkei genkai unavailable in any way whatsoever, at most let him have access to bloodlines the is not too obvious like uzumaki, senju or create 1 that works for his basic attributes like swift release , an agility bloodline limit or something no one can know for sure until he tells them. packing all sort of abilities into your OC does not make him look cool an mysterious it rather makes him look cumbersome and also makes the OC feel like an attention whore. trying tho make a reincarnated OC op in naruto is easeir if you focus on the basics like taijutsu, the OC is reincarnted yet for taijutsu he learns the same style almost all the shinobi in the village learn, absolutely ridiculous. there is muay thai, brazillian jiujutsu, pencak silat, capoeira ,etc. not to mention its possible to fuse all this techniques library of heaven's path style if the OC has a system. This is at least things I think you should have thought of before even going into the ninjutsu, genjutsu and bloodline limits