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Comments of chapter undefined of The System: Civilian Shinobi

aswalzz
aswalzzLv10aswalzz

hmmmm. . its better if he command him to kill himself. . sighh

Bakimaru
BakimaruLv2Bakimaru

And the nerf continues.

sogeking
sogekingLv4sogeking

Disturbance There is in the force, nerf i can feel in you

Shazy333
Shazy333Lv4Shazy333

The Nerf is strong in this one.

MinMinOppa
MinMinOppaLv4MinMinOppa

zetsu can literally infiltrate konoha and kill or kidnap his loved one or threaten him and use him like he used madara. hope he wont tell tsunade or anyome for that matter about the sharingan. and he should definitely shut up about the uchiha clan shit and investigate it first. because obviously the elders will deny them doing that and he can get arrested for slandering them of betrayal and tsunade won't believe it coz her teacher was the hokage at that time. i'm so annoyed but i understand, mc is just a stupid little kid that got lucky with the system without it he will be just a basic cannon fodder ninja that got brainwashed and will readily sacrifice himself for konoha and die on his first mission or the suna invasion. m(_ _)m

UncrownedKing
UncrownedKingLv14UncrownedKing

really, these comments never cease to amaze me at how idiotic they can be. calling nerf when the cooldown is a canonical penalty to using the ability. and he didn't even know about susanoo so he would have never used it anyway. now he does know about it and can start using it when people that actually require that level of ability start to show up after the time skip.

Lord_Tobi
Lord_TobiLv5Lord_Tobi

Tobi wants to see what will Tobi do when he is unable to set foot in Konoha! Give Tobi POV! woooooo

Kurama_is_tsundere
Kurama_is_tsundereLv6Kurama_is_tsundere

what can I say I am just disappointed but I knew the author is a sadist who will continue to fck the MC over so that's nothing new. Now I am reading just for the fun of it, just to see how much the author can nerf the MC and how far he will take it.🤣👍

Reyman15
Reyman15Lv5Reyman15

the MC is just a pawn

Ngadimun
NgadimunLv5Ngadimun

I dont know what to say. Im speechless this beyond salvation, Even he cant set foot in konoha he can send zetsu to kidnap hes parent dude wtf

shenzbnfufV2
shenzbnfufV2Lv14shenzbnfufV2

Guys stop beign retards every thing that happened was good and made sense and for the ones complaining shut up bruh no one wants to hear about it if you hate it then leave

NoiizFPS
NoiizFPSLv6NoiizFPS

there is no point of him getting stronger if ur gonna nerf him all the time

KingYasser
KingYasserLv15KingYasser

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

SEPPIA
SEPPIALv4SEPPIA

I'm not saying he has to leave or destroy the village. I'm saying he has to develop his own thinking. In 70 chapters we have seen how he was pushed to do everything he was told. He does not think he acts only in the interests of the village. The good of the village before its own good. I hope he develops his own mind and starts thinking a bit more for himself by not putting the village first. Not like naruto throughout the anime

Bogg_Dann
Bogg_DannLv4Bogg_Dann

Oh shit, this guy is so strong that i cant see anything about him using inspect only question marks, lets show him that i a civilian shinobi have a mangekyo sharingan!

OllieZ
OllieZLv6OllieZ

If he knows how OP is kamui, why didn't he chose it...

darkimortal
darkimortalLv6darkimortal

Well this is goodbye. It makes sense you'd do something like this, the stories quality has been dropping for awhile now. I mean really Danzo gets this OP eye power but the MC's power is trash. You're writing yourself into a corner with all this garbage.

Phil_Morris
Phil_MorrisLv4Phil_Morris

what is he gonna say when they ask how he escaped him if he does tell them that uchiha madara(obito) went into his apartment there is no way he would escap cause this sint a regular kage lvl ninja like kisame or itachi he is uchiha madara well at least they will think he is.

Kurama_is_tsundere
Kurama_is_tsundereLv6Kurama_is_tsundere

oh I forgot to mention one thing in my previous comment.YHE AUTHOR FCKED UP BIG THIS TIME. HE ONLY MADE MC COMMAND HIM NOT SET FOOT IN KONOHA NOTHING ELSE THAT MEANS TOBI REMEMBERS GOING TO KONOHA TO MEET MC AND THIS BEING UNABLE TO ENTER KONOHA IS BECAUSE OF MC. LOL THE MC WILL BECOME A SUPER HIGH PRIORITY KILL/CAPTURE TARGET IF HE ISN'T ALREADY ONE BECAUSE OF WHAT HE DID TO KISAME 🤣👍 GOOD LUCK AUTHOR LETS SEE YOU BULLSHIZ YOUR WAY OUT OF THAT 😂

Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5Harem_fan

My only beef with this is if Ambu has this why not Madara?.....[I could see his Mangekyou Sharingan through the hole in the mask…]...You would think he would have something so basic as Ambu as well right?

Daoist_Storm
Daoist_StormLv13Daoist_Storm

I don't know why every writer of fanfics like to pack all sort of unique abilities into their OC. yet somehow they are still weaker than the main characters. The title of your novel is the The System: CIVILLIAN Shinobi keyword CIVILLIAN. In my view you should have made the system make all clan doujustu and kenkei genkai unavailable in any way whatsoever, at most let him have access to bloodlines the is not too obvious like uzumaki, senju or create 1 that works for his basic attributes like swift release , an agility bloodline limit or something no one can know for sure until he tells them. packing all sort of abilities into your OC does not make him look cool an mysterious it rather makes him look cumbersome and also makes the OC feel like an attention whore. trying tho make a reincarnated OC op in naruto is easeir if you focus on the basics like taijutsu, the OC is reincarnted yet for taijutsu he learns the same style almost all the shinobi in the village learn, absolutely ridiculous. there is muay thai, brazillian jiujutsu, pencak silat, capoeira ,etc. not to mention its possible to fuse all this techniques library of heaven's path style if the OC has a system. This is at least things I think you should have thought of before even going into the ninjutsu, genjutsu and bloodline limits