Comments of chapter undefined of The System: Civilian Shinobi
The System: Civilian Shinobi
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let the mc keep forgetting about stat points so he doesn't know he can close level gap with stats so his teammates can die and he's a solo emo
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Dude, why can any one of these characters who have this type of system use it, I mean you get the points so use the fucking points it's better if you super Saiyan at the beginning to finish the battle quickly not suepr Saiyan in the middle it's fucking stupid use the points and upgrade you status, Jesus I hate it and the worst thing is the mc always complains about being behind and BS but just fucking spread em put, you also have Shop Points what are you saving em for? The Sharingan bitch if you buy the Sharingan and not Uchiha bloodline say goodbye to your chakra cause that bitch is going to always be active, I mean at least buy a Kekkai Genkai any fucking even Uzumaki shit or Senju both would be way better as you get immense chakra, vitality and fuinjutsu or adamantium chains, or immense chakra, vitality and mokutan.
I find the story interesting so far. The fighting in this chapter was too descriptive that it just made me feel like ignoring it. Fights are faced paced you should just say what the action is directly without being to descriptive. Ex. Tobi dashed forward to Iruka quickly, then dropped down into a low sweep. Iruka jumped to dodge. Tobi pushed off the ground with his hands trying to take Iruka by surprise with a double kick. That was something I just came up with bot the best but I hope the idea comes across. With that I say good luck to you and hope you improve as a writer with this fanfic. Good luck.
