ian_brooks
the story is a bit confusing, I get he is a Saiyan but it seems like it is going in a weird direction with introducing Oozaru and KI techniques so suddenly. Plus no one has even questioned how he can change, the world he is in does have KI techniques but it is also just a normal world with no supernatural side to it. if you had just focused on his Saiyan ability like Zenkai boost that would be understanding even super saiyan could be explained as a power-up transformation, but you strangely clashed the two worlds. Plus what is up with this knowledge of DBZ techniques he has out of know where. plus the tail on his body that is not even questioned. this story just frustrates me even the grammar needs to be fixed just use Grammarly Sorry but I just think this needs a whole new re-write the story is just all over the place.