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Comments of chapter undefined of Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician

Mirio_kun
Mirio_kunLv1Mirio_kun

I don't think it is possible to mix both worlds simply because of the people mcu has. The will be tons of plot holes which will take most of your time to fill rather than progressing the story. And I was really looking forward to a great dxd fic....

HufflePuff
HufflePuffLv4HufflePuff

It seems difficult to mix the two worlds? Power levels plus the universe is all over the place? Thanos obvi would get thrashed by ophis, red and even shiva/sirzechs but like devils hate humans? so wouldnt even ironman be like a ultimate class at best? What about loki from asgard vs the god loki from dxd? Two odins???

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Kiyan_Tribe
Kiyan_TribeLv13Kiyan_Tribe

you are very rude author San. If you can't write just don't. But don't go insulting people like that for what they like.

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TakeruNobunaga
TakeruNobunagaLv3TakeruNobunaga

I don't really understand the people here commenting that this won't work or assuming this isn't gonna be good. Why do they need to act like whiny babies when this novel is good and new? People always act like they are better than the writers who painstakingly took their time to write something that will entertain people. 🤦🏻 This is why most fanfic novels that are good gets ruined by people who does not care about the author and other people that enjoy a good read.

Zeus_1412
Zeus_1412Lv4Zeus_1412

You're right, most DXD female characters are boring, but I'm still a little worried about how you're going to unite these two universes that have the same characters but with different personalities and powers (Nordic Pantheon for example), but I trust your skills , you didn't let me down with your Naruto fanfic

Skaar
SkaarLv4Skaar

I really find the fact that you agree dxd with the mcu interesting, but you should know that there are characters that you should handle correctly like odin who was the one who taught Issey about oppai and who convinced him in a pervert, and Odin of the mcu is the opposite.

Alabado_sea_gonza
Alabado_sea_gonzaLv2Alabado_sea_gonza

I think you should read the DxD novels a bit. There are really characters that you come to appreciate a lot, like Rias or Akeno

Left_Nut_Of_Madara
Left_Nut_Of_MadaraLv13Left_Nut_Of_Madara

I dig it there are a few fics out there that do this and do it good so i see no reason to not do it if you can make it flow smoothly

Shajid
ShajidLv4Shajid

what is the ancient one doing letting devil's and strays run wild. she with the time stone can beat any devil or angel

Firefist_02
Firefist_02Lv1Firefist_02

To be honest, Thanos is a bit of a problem without stones. Even with stones, power stone is basically the power of destruction. The Time Stone is the power of the Agares Family, the Reality Stone is Georg's Sacred Gear. In MSU, Thanos attacked only after the death of Oden because he was afraid of him. Here Odin is not only not going to die, but there are a bunch of other gods. Hela is equal in strength to Greyfia and/or Serafall. Aside from Wanda and Jean, they can't be stronger than Ophis and Great Red.

sideface
sidefaceLv4sideface

just hoping this doesnt become a sh*tshow

King_Gluttony
King_GluttonyLv14King_Gluttony

Knowing what world he is in may be scary but it just opened up many new avenues. He could use his power on Captain America to learn more about the Super Soldier Serum to try and reverse engineer it. He could become a sorcerer and learn how to use Universal Energies to supplement his Sacred Gear usage. He could use his Sacred Gear on mutants to gain an understanding of the dimensions they connect to. So long as he has a steady plan to utilize his knowledge of this universe and future events, he set to become OP before either the MCU or DxD plots start.

ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv13ArtoriaPendragon_

Pfft, I’m actually laughing my a*s off at how quick everyone left😂 And I can’t even blame them! The fact that you didn’t mention a crossover is annoying, but the fact that it’s a cross between MCU and DxD just completely ruined it😂 Good job! You probably just lost like 80% of your readers😂

Grenhaer
GrenhaerLv4Grenhaer

To be honest, I'm very disappointed...why make a dxd fanfic if you're not interested in the girls of this world...because they are the "heart" of this world...there won't be dxd girls in his harem?

reader12143546
reader12143546Lv10reader12143546

I like your fanfic and your style author sama, plz dont stop your story. And this is your fanfic ,your world, your story and your are a god in this place.

fangk1ng
fangk1ngLv5fangk1ng

I can respect this crossover if you planned it out carefully but i hope you didn't just complicate and increase the complexity of the story just get 1 girl that you could have just made into an original character 😮‍💨, otherwise that puts into question if this story was planned out at all or if it was just half assed with impulse decisions 🤷‍♂️

anirbanghosh030
anirbanghosh030Lv4anirbanghosh030

Hey author! Never change man, you've got the exact right attitude you need to succeed. You care about your story enough to fight for it and it shows. Please don't drop this story suddenly, I'd love to see more. Thanks for writing.

MonkeResurrection
MonkeResurrectionLv2MonkeResurrection

He just got so many power up ways given to him by being in the mcu such as but not limited to: - super soldier serum(view captain americas past or his blood's past) - Sanctums(op magic and artifacts he can view the past of) - Technology(iron man etc.) Quantum realm(ant man) - X-gene(he might have one or he can create one through viewing a mutant's past) - Tiamut(there should be a celestial inside the earth right), - - THE INFINTY STONES(be like captain marvel and get exposed to infinty stone energy) - Spidey-bite(you know spiderman right?) - Super random power up(getting exposed to radiation or other super powerful energy can do that) - Darkhold or The book of Vishtani(viewcthe past) - Find a empty domain(like the dark dimension) - Find wanda and get her powers to a contract(gg boys, reality bending powers coming) - Just make a contract with every super powered hero or villain and steal their powers through the contract(gg boys)

ZaP_Tempest
ZaP_TempestLv4ZaP_Tempest

Thank you for the chapter! Off the top of my head, I can't think of many good cross over stories on Webnovel so I am rooting for your story! Keep up the great work and ignore the haters!

danty
dantyLv4danty

Would be nice if you made it clear in the beginning you were going to do a crossover. I mean why not just make an OC character as love interest?