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Balu1995
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This is borderline unreadable

VinixxVidixxVici
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Fixed the formattimg error

Dogramagra
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JustAnotherFan217
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You skipped too much. I mean, what’s so hard about putting things in order? Where are his parents? Are they dead? Or did they give him up for no reason like every cliche bashing fic

Lucas_Oliveira_2302
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when will the fanfiction about ben 10 return?

Sevennamed
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You should really avoid writing in third person, it's not very readable when you do it.

the_fat_taoist
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Pro_Gamer_161
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Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author 😜 A Fantastic Chapter As Always 😉

Jake_Zajirne
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I haven't checked on pc but on mobile it looks like you haven't heard of the enter key. your story (at the time of writing this) lacks paragraphs and is written in one large chunk.

LuciusDragon
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Edit it and thanks

Sommerscave
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Thanks for the chapter 🙏

Anish_Kumar_6194
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when will next chapter come?

GODKINGASH
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Noice

Anish_Kumar_6194
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It was good . Please post more chapters.

LazyAdept
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Thanks for the chapter

bored_mortal
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Great chapter ^^