Comments of chapter undefined of Return of the Immortal Mage

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SomeSpookyGuyLv3SomeSpookyGuy

This story of yours is kinda hard to read. I mean, you could at least use the ““ when someone is talking.

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QATCODAuthorQATCOD

I usually do write "" but in some sentences it is missed but in the story I usually write it

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German_Gerona_6536Lv2German_Gerona_6536

can you write a parenthesis in conversation of the mc and other characters?

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ChesquilkLv4Chesquilk

The story is a little confusing because it happens really fast and the parentheses

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QATCODAuthorQATCOD

Read this and tell me

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