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Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of house Black

JamesAnthony1999
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The last few paragraphs of the previous chapter and this chapter needs a little bit of editing

Daoist_Of_Pride
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this novel is literally a copy of another one except for the Naruto powers

creepycatisawesone
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yahallo well I like the chapters and the characters.but I think that Being under the radar is not the right thing . Well you could use off the radar instead thanks for the chapter

darkcat
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thanks for the chapter

NikoBellic
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Why is it every si fanfiction ive read ive always seen the "get the best marks but pretend to be magically weak" act, Gets boring

leonel551
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i feel like you made him to old! doesn't all the good stuff happen after percy graduate? the mc is the same age right!