Reviews of Zack Fair on Remnant

This is a early review so things may improve or degrade from her but who can say. So far character interaction has been very well done while most (not all) characters have been portrayed rather accurately. Updating has been consise but since this fic is still early that may change. Chapter length is great as well. Some characters aren't portrayed as well as others but story progression isn't hasty and a slow build is always a plus in my books. If the quality stays consistent then this piece will be on is way to a 4 or 5 star in no time.

Awesome story great opening and progression I can't wait to see where you lead us next one this awesome adventure. Also p.s. love that you actually used ff7 haven't been able to find one like this anywhere. Thanks so much die hard FF 7 fan hehehehe

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All i can say is that this novel is great has lots of potential. I'm looking forward to the development of the story. But....If the author dare try to drop this novel...😄🔪

Had fun reading upto ch 14.Hope you keep pumping out more chapters so I can give you Power stones. Also for the people who are curious what really stood out for me in this novel is the awesome main character and wacky comedy it has going on much like one piece .

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so far im liking the story, you are doing a good job at portraying Zacks character, my only problem is the whole sephiroth thing you got going on, but since i still don't know what you're going to do with that ill wait to see how it goes.

5 en todas para que sigas publicando :v.............................................................................................................................

I fricking love it so keep it up, man. Here's the downpayment .

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I like it, more chapter I like it, more chapter I like it, more chapter I like it, more chapter I like it, more chapter I like it, more chapter

Good Stpry

Suggestion: if you ever get in writers block do a alternate reality of where the teenager that was supposed to die by truck-kun reincarnates instead

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