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Comments of chapter undefined of Fey Evolution Merchant

EIo_Police
EIo_PoliceLv14EIo_Police

dunno but there is no progress in this story. for like the last 40 chapters we haven't made progress with his feys or himself.

Heliard
HeliardLv14Heliard

Just to make things clear: I love the story. But here I want to complain! We have been through 5 chapters of pure info dump... The author really likes to take his time. I am really suffering here, on one side I love this story but on the other side I feel wasting my time reading descriptions over and over and repeat. Hopefully the story will continue from now *fingers crossed*

Darthodin
DarthodinLv10Darthodin

this is why i love this story,if this was another author we would have some bullshit about how the MC cant accept being protected even thou every other young person is,just to show how bad usually chinese novels are,even basic logic gets praise,its kinda sad

MochiFeelings
MochiFeelingsLv14MochiFeelings

I only have one complaint. they just brushed off the attempted murder like that?

GreatSage_Arcadia
GreatSage_ArcadiaLv15GreatSage_Arcadia

Slow progress is not bad but you cant have 3-4 chapters of little to nothing especially when the chapters are as short as these ones are the novel is interesting and is different enough making it a worthwhile read which is nice we need either more or longer chapters please đŸ‘đŸ»đŸ€”đŸ„łđŸ˜Ž

DreamedLullaby
DreamedLullabyLv15DreamedLullaby

Thanks for the chapter~đŸ±

Dazai_07
Dazai_07Lv14Dazai_07

thank you for another chapter!!!

Edamame_8
Edamame_8Lv15Edamame_8

I'm glad MC is opening up a bit.

Joshua_Whitmore
Joshua_WhitmoreLv14Joshua_Whitmore

the comments are always either it's too short or the exposition is too much. idc the story itself is worthwhile

SkiIIzrock
SkiIIzrockLv13SkiIIzrock

He knows there's so much he's not aware of now for upgrading fey, so why didn't he ask for her advice on his upgrade paths? There should be a lot of stuff he's not aware of that she could help with...

Jack_N_Mikhail
Jack_N_MikhailLv15Jack_N_Mikhail

interesting

ToanN
ToanNLv6ToanN

This spider needed to keep her mouth shut, it was rare that a master gets to show off and u tried to steal her limelight.

Invisiblevoice
InvisiblevoiceLv6Invisiblevoice

Moon this, moon that, sin cleanesing this, sin cleanesing that, fantasy this, fantasy that, grade this, grade that, quality this, quality that. OK, i can live with how much chinese writers like to repeate themselves, they must love counting how many words they have written. However, would it kill them putting more plot instead of info dumps? I know the info is needed, but i'd love it if the ratio of info and plot weren't 3:1 or similar. So, how many chapters until Lin Yuan actually goes to get the ingredients and evolves his plant? I know the chapters are short, but should i up my example from 3:1 to 4:1? To 5:1?