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Just to make things clear: I love the story. But here I want to complain! We have been through 5 chapters of pure info dump... The author really likes to take his time. I am really suffering here, on one side I love this story but on the other side I feel wasting my time reading descriptions over and over and repeat. Hopefully the story will continue from now *fingers crossed*
Moon this, moon that, sin cleanesing this, sin cleanesing that, fantasy this, fantasy that, grade this, grade that, quality this, quality that. OK, i can live with how much chinese writers like to repeate themselves, they must love counting how many words they have written. However, would it kill them putting more plot instead of info dumps? I know the info is needed, but i'd love it if the ratio of info and plot weren't 3:1 or similar. So, how many chapters until Lin Yuan actually goes to get the ingredients and evolves his plant? I know the chapters are short, but should i up my example from 3:1 to 4:1? To 5:1?