CanYouMakeItClear
Hello! Author-sama here! Bringing you the story I really wanted to read, an Attack on Titan Fan-Fic !!! So I decided that I will create one and here you go! Bang- The Fan-Fic is created! YAHOOOO! I rewatched AOT 4× this past 2 months and I'm really in it, on creating the best Attack on Titan Fan-Fic in the best of my ability. With that being said, hope you new readers like it! And PEACEEEEEEEEEEE!
Bro you deserve 5 Freaking stars because you created an Amazung novel with an Amazing concept and man I am Enjoying every last bit of it, keep it up bro keep it up, you got this. man just thank you, thank you for creating something Awesome, thank you for creating an Awesome AOT Novel and to be honest it's no.1 on AOT fanfic novel out there in my opinion!!!!
Well, I'll try to do a synopsis of this novel. Our MC's name is Vincent, he has no romantic interest at the moment except maybe with Annie but it's very vague. The MC doesn't have a titan, he's a simple human but he's as smart as Armin and as strong as Livai (basically). He has no obsession with romance with girls and prefers children (not the way you think). He is one of the few fanfictions that is not a Yaoi (I prefer to warn because there are people including me who are disturbed by Yaoi). When the author says "peace", he means like what it is the goal of the MC to live a simple life but he is confronted with the reality of the titans. I also add that the MC reincarnates but has no knowledge of the canon and handles the mystery of the titans with just deductions and assumptions
This review may change as I continue to read the chapters, I hope that you get this and improve your material to the best of your abilities. Grammar is bad, there are mistake that change the whole meaning of a sentence, also some bad word selection, the sentences either have additional words or is missing something, of course i don't expect something amazing in wn, but this is definitely a bad side regardless ( maybe english isn’t your first language, neither mine, but there is a lot of apps to correct your mistakes, please do make use of them). I read the first chapters and I felt kinda boring and cringe at the same time, a lot of unnecessary scenes... details that could be skipped, not much invested in design, but the actions are very detailed, but still, it didn't reveal anything important to the readers in my opinion. I am fine with mc liking children and all that, there are contracted assassins with morals in real life as well, but what is his reason for liking children that much (if it is in the fanfic then ignore this point) ? I'm not gonna judge u about the beggars because that's irrelevant to the story, but the fanfic seems to portray that is common for beggars to make part of gangs, which is totally possible, but that's not common my man; Giving 1000$ to a girl is silly as well, even if he was following her, assuming that she "might" participate in a gang is irresponsible action.
it was good at the beginning,but still had a couple problems,the story is basically the same as canon except for the mc and a few other changes the mc for one acts like he is the father of all the other characters his age or younger,and is also a hypocrite not to mention the horrible rushed ending,other than that it was an ok story minus all the problems it had
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