J_Titan
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Everybody is weird in this story. the mc gets reincarnated then compliments how hot his mom is, and uses the excuse that βits not wierd im just appreciating beautyβ like yeah its weird. also the system is annoying and Everything the system says and does is annoying. so basically its bad because alabama relationship and annoying characters
All i see when reading this story A multi-galaxy level entity doing everything he wants for the reasons to satisfy his vanity. This actions are: 1. Has the capability to save a family, to let the mother be with her daughter but due to his reasons of wanting everything the same as what happen on the story that he once read/watch on screen that he prefer to let the daughter a child less than 8yo below to suffer in the streets and letting the mother know that he is capable to reunite them as family but wont because in his word " Thay would be boring" saying it with a smile. 2. The Mc as a character is already a "lost case". For all the experience that he accumulate to other destructive, decieving, cutthroat worlds that he should be experiencing first hand you might as well think that all the innocent lives, deaths that would have been avoided will be save for him being active but what we got is an galaxy level entity would prefer to have their deaths pave his way to have an "easy" life. 3. Fearing/avoiding the UNKNOWN. For all of his strenght and capability you would have think that his mature enough to feel pity to having knowledge to the people that would be suffering and could be avoided if he set-aside his childish mindset of letting "canon" go and face his challenges no matter insignificant they may be. 4. Overall his character is the same as those power wankers story with a mindset and mentality of a child but with more in depth explanation and development. Writing quality is readible, grammar is understandable with a minor spelling error. Thats just my point of view review of the story.
Hmm ... the author asked his readers for a review. I honestly don't mind, because the author answered my question and I like his work. But making an honest review is difficult because few chapters have been written. So ... I'll just lay out my stream of consciousness, that is, I'll write directly what is in my head now. If I offend someone ... although I shouldn't, I'm not on purpose. If you haven't left yet, I want to say that after reading the description of the fanfic, I was counting on something dull. But I didn't care at that moment. And I started reading ... To my surprise, the work was much better than I expected. I like it. But it also became a cause for concern. What concern am I talking about? The MC will not kill Issei and take his equipment. Moreover, he will make friends with him. 99% of the time I don't like it. I acknowledge Issei's positive qualities. He is ready to sacrifice himself for the sake of his dreams (boobs), it's worth something. But I still hate his presence in fanfiction. Probably ... because I was unable to read the original completely due to Issei's constant thoughts. The hero seemed to me then too miserable, literally a slave to his desires. Caution. Some spoilers. In any case, the author said that Rias and I suspect the rest of the girls will also fall into MC's harem, not Issei. And his screen time will be short. If this really is the case, then it is still bearable for me. Don't get me wrong, I would be willing to read this from the start if it was the mediocre shit I thought of because of the description. But because the work turned out to be good, I was not ready to put up with the plot where Issei gets screen time and a harem. Even if he has a lot of good qualities, I don't want to see him in a funk. Fortunately, the author reassured me. Of course, I would be much happier if Issei never woke up his gear for the rest of the story and just fell out of it. But I'm not the author. In any case, if the author does not quit this job, I expect quite a lot from it. From the MC's prehistory and some reservations, I also expect a big harem, which, in my opinion, is a must in worlds like DxD. Hopefully MC will not change his goal of creating a big family. Hehe. Well, something like this. :)
THIS IS A MUST READ I have finally caught up to the current chapter and I am very happy with the MC and family development. This DxD is perhaps one of the best in regard to keeping the feel of the anime and LN story....What to expect the MC is basically a god playing as a mortal and enjoying his last world to its fullest. If you hate Rias or expect the MC to NTR waifus or kill Issei then DO NOT READ THIS....Anyway I said my piece...Later!
Temporary score until I decide whether the Author-san is improving or not. The grammar and sentence construction is honestly the worst part. All this novel needs is improvement there and it should see a huge leap in popularity. It's a story of a multiverse travelling OP character so world background is a given for each canon. The MC is kind of weird since he seems to swap between young pervert and old father-type.
Well... Should you read this novel for fun? Well yes... but is not a masterpiece but is yet enjoyable. I won't speak specifically about writing quality cause I'm not really a user of english, so I'm lacking in this sector. Talking about the story plot, I've put 3 star becuse we are still in the biginning of the story and I need more chapter to understand if it's good or not, but I can say that the author has his own ideas and he won't copy (I hope) the original story canon, and that itself is very good. About characters design and world background, what can I say? You have an op mc in DxD universe, what more can you ask for? (Sorry for my bad english, but I'm too lazy to use google translator or other sites to correct the grammar)
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This story Is hilarious in the way He could just end the story right now but he decides to help Others get stronger. I like it, i like how he respects the Boundaries of others and doesnt get between budding romances such as Rias and Issei or Asia, he is flirty and kind of childish yet he is mature and isnβt dense, even though some romances are being pushed a little fast I like it and i can see how they Could come to be. He Doesnt want akeno to love him just because he saved her mother and thats kind of real to me.