La verdad me encanto es muy buena aunque tiene un par de hoyos en la trama es muy entretenida una pena que ya no continue ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Honestly, in the beginning it was a little bland, but after that it was great. The twists, the story, as well as all the action is great. The writing quailty is pretty good and comedy is on point. Over all a great read.
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To be clear this novel deserves a read from anyone that enjoys one piece I read this before it was remastered and am current on the rework. For the most part I like what the other has done Character growth is more present in this than many novels let alone fan fiction I do have reservations on how a couple love interests have been handled But I dont want to be a spoiler The MC has made some mistakes here and there And plot armor is present But the novel is genuinely fun to read Thank you author
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Masterpiece... A bunch of emotions and a great plot. Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ... Great ...
Just finished reading and what else can i say but it's a great story with good characters and world building.When i saw the number of chapters i was sceptical of the quality of this fanfic but you made me think otherwise with the length of your chapters Wich are quite lengthy.All together a great thanks to the author for this brillant work 👍👍👍👍
Everyone already says it's dropped. but there are a few don’t like it. Such is how mc acts and his power level . I mean luffy has become so powerful after time skip. but in the story Mc is so weak even after more than 7 years training with Garp. love interest!
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I arrived until the chapters and I say WTF and Nami is painted or that good at the end is its history but man, built a beautiful relationship with Nami and Puffff, it is clear that I'm going to get the redundancy in the chapter where it says you can not love anyone else if someone changes that I say that for wonderful history but and nami **** ....
Ya llevo unos pocos años leyendo y por el momento e llorado solo en esta serie y sin duda alguna es mi favorita especialmente el final me reí demaciado y recomiendo a todos que lo disfrutes.
Para los hispano hablantes , muy buen fanfiction , el mc bien diseñado ,buen humor y etc , la verdad disfrute mucho leyendo es de los mejores de este tipo que ay ahí afuera 10/10
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This is probably the one of the best fanfics I have ever read you have done a amazing job keep up the good work rhrrjjfjjfjfnfjfjfjfjffjjiff
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genial, me gusta mucho su historia, aunque no se original, pero igual me gusta sigue escribiendo bro........................................[img = actualización]
Yo dont delete this book its actually pretty good so come on man dont do it i really enjoY this book so keep writing so i can have some to read when im bored in school 😂😂😂