HolyJoker
I kinda don't like shifting the focus to MC becoming more of a side character rather then the leading character. I'm fine if it's two to tree chapters but now your forcing more screentime to to the supporting character then your MC.
for now yeah. but if you gonna keep making the MC a side character then that I don't like or either your side character that I dont like ("Kisame") replacing your MC screen time. fanfic should be focused in your MC in my opinion that's why I tends to stay away to fanfic with excessive OC characters and drop it.
HolyJoker:You read a story because you enjoy it bro.