Reviews of Travelling Through The Multiverse With An Anime System

Too much gender-bending. Rushed. Read through early chaps but dropped it when the gender-bending thingy came up. P.S:Pls stop spamming 5-star reviews that just say <emoji>

you have so far delivered a story that is pure awesomeness. can you please write some more chapters I can't wait for more of this story is it just so good that I just can't stop reading it

don’t drop.

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meh your usual trash were the mc is a complete idiot who thinks with his D but thats what I expected to be honest idk why this keep recommend to me it pure trash

Its just not that good, i mean yes one cheap shot from me is mentioning the grammar is bad when he did so himself, but even other than that the mc is kinda just meh

basically the same as the op anime system:god blessing except mc is colder and it is rushed yh you can read but better to read original he also changed beerus gender so I gues that's okay

higher than AVG grammer and putting dots(.......) unnecessarily to lengthen the chapter is incredibly annoying . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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The actual writing makes sense, but the punctuation needs a bit of work. Other than that, keep up the good work! Hope to see future chapters

No mencionare sobre la calidad de escritura por que es irrelevante. Tampoco comentare sobre la estabilidad de actualización. El desarrollo de la historia es basura, lleva todo muy adelantado, hay muchos saltos del tiempo, es demasiado op y es algo estupido por que no especifica lo que obtiene, como teletransportarse y toda la weva, almenos explica como la consiguió. El diseño de personaje es horrible dice que no le importa sus padres cuando piensa en ellos para convertirse en super sayajin y el fondo del mundo es patetico. No sabe casi nada de dragon ball, y cambio el sexo de los personajes. Es completamente asqueroso Ahora por mi comentario espero que borre mi critica como lo hace todo autor debil y superficial

so here we start okay, to be honest I haven't read this novel but from this title it's definitely interesting so don't disappoint the reader okay and don't HIATUS / drop this novel ok ?, so my suggestion is that the author needs to go crazy up chapters and lengthen words in 1 chapter if it can't be long, at most, make it 2 chapters per day so readers will be happy and will give you support so that's all, well, don't drop it okay! hah ... the important thing is to keep the spirit in making this novel goodbye!

hallow thor, I come from Indonesia, honestly I really like your fanfic novel, which I think is interesting and good, and every word is funny, and I hope this novel will continue unlike other novels that stop in the middle of the road.. and I have a suggestion. .. it would be nice to skip a few years of thor so that I can quickly enter/go to another world

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