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Comments of chapter undefined of Time Space User System

shivkira
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i have seen till chapter 9 and i would say that story is going good and grammar is also good in this novel. So good work author. but i would like to say that you should give a name to parents of mc , luke mother doesn't feel good everytime to read

KingDeadMan
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unless your own grammar is good, I'd say that you shouldn't talk much about that part.

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thanks for the chapter

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Teeler
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Seems interesting so far

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AsuraTheReaper
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I hIpe he can actually use space power Cause every time i See s tIme space book mc only Has time ability or just regular elements

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xp

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chadodesu
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oh good start..

Merame
MerameLv5Merame

Thanks for the chapter :)

brian1646
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is the name Luke Lewis based off of the Australian comedy podcast with the name Luke and Lewis

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Kami12
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Thanks

MiszLya
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Keep up your good work author 👍😁