HelloDarkness07
Well is whole relationship with Odin started of with extreme biased assumptions least he forget his older sister is the goddess of death it’s in her nature to go around killing things Odin just gave her something to focus on he didn’t raise her to be a killer that’s just the opinion of hela which is valid because she feels that way but it doesn’t make it true but our dumb mc can’t see through this and judges Odin before even trying to get Odin's attention so he is distancing himself from Odin which is expected and understandable given what he believes but this also puts a wall between them pushing Odin away but mc doesn’t really understand this he blames Odin for everything even when he could have just gone to the old man and talked to him asked him questions I mean he is the god or wisdom, magic and war the allfather why not pull the relationship closer on his own volition instead of just being jealous of how Odin likes Thor more and his knowledge is making him forget that he is living in this world and these are his family no a bloody comic book where good and bad are clear cut and Odin had to do his best with hela and Thor has to be prepared for the throne which means sacrifices must be made just like if mom has to work late and you have to either make your own food or order out depending on your families financial situation and your cooking abilities it’s not in anyway a excuse but it’s a fact
Hope MC doesn't become Daddy's little girl, wanting his attention when he grows up. Already read tons of novels that did that and it ruined it for me. For f*cks sake those MC would s*ck their daddy's d*ck if it meant gaining their attention. Hated those novel. It would have been better to ignore the dad and just put all their attention to the mom or themselves. There would even be a redemption chapters for the father/parents, then they would be best friends like nothing ever happened.
Also , pls try to gain power from different sources. It's honestly frustrating to read MC just learning one power for a century. Also dont make him learn weapons for a century and time skip.Theres a lot of ways to gain power. Also make him use his head and mind palace .If he isn't a genius in combat WITH a mind palace ,I'll be disappointed. Don't nerf MC!!!!