ReaperDZero
Well,author the bad review for the book says it's due to that club scene. I too agree,its honestly more bad that he didn't save them. you could have just used pickpocketing in alleys or something. But I really hope ,it weighs on his conscience and saves them.Poor kids. Whats the point of becoming strong if not also in his character?
Excellent story author. I can see that you did hours of research before writing this fic.Its very good and i quite like those info dumps. Also,can you make him not just stay in earth?Theres the nova empire ,kree,skrull, empires.He could become a well known hero or guardian of the Universe or sorts. Also, there IS a galactic empire managing the galaxy (nova prime) ,so become a universal celebrity or sorts.Dont limit himself to puny earth. It'll give him enormous respect and money on galactic scale. Also,i can say that the ANCIENT ONE is definitely aware of him now.So you can meet her and learn from her.Dont underestimate her wisdom.I can say that she has a fair chance of killing our MC easily right now. So,become her student and learn everything within a year,Magic is honestly helpful . Dr.strange , a normal human could defeat Cosmic beings with just magic. Think about what our MC can do.