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Did he really just grab the money and leave without saving the girls? I definitely do NOT want him to become a hero but thats the type of shit you dont just ignore...

The system like stat is bugging me,, I mean why you want to measure his power with numbers?? It's just stupid,,,

1.3 hrs to go from usa to brazil,but only 3 hrs to go to sun and back??!!

by the synopsis I thought it will be something very different and new but it was just another marvel fanfic nothing exceptional it's not bad but it does not do the synopsis justice there is only one word for this novel "ordinary"

10yrs till Iron Man, but Fury was talking about project Insight, which could only be built with Starks tech after he became Iron Man

Did I miss something? When did he age 4 years? And how did the adoption take so little time? I know the author is rushing the story and it is a fiction, but even in fiction there must be a little realism. And there is no realism in the adoption happening without the orphenege checking the family first.

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author 😜 A Fantastic Chapter As Always 😉

look man you are the creator of the story it would have been better if you hadn't told us about what was going on in the club. the fact that you did and still didn't make the mc do anything about it is troubling. Thank God this is just a fake story.

He talks about how smart he is but acts stupid. Why leave the safety of the orphanage. While he is in the Marvel world or with SHIELD he risks being thought of as an alien if he decides to have a business. Honestly go to school, become a genius and continue training in secret. This decision alone ruins everything.

Great fic, thanks.

No system please

Its good but ,too much inner monologue ,lesS conversation

Too many explanation, it makes the story boring .

Thx

Thanks

Damn cant stop saying how good this is. Pls dont give him unnecessary nerfs

bro, write more so that you can get into the rankings, i'm sure by then your fanfic would be very famous. the grammar and storyline is very good and i'm sure others admit this too. only 15,000 words left. YOU CAN DO IT!

It's too early for me to give my opinion.

Thanks for the chapter!