Comments of chapter undefined of Suerte y perseverancia

Una mejora muy notable desde el 1º volumen donde sin pelos en la lengua debo decir el inicio fue flojo,entretenido pero flojo. pero se nota el esfuerzo y la mejora del sr.autor xD

Un buen comienzo. Algo flojo pero en general bien. Si no recuerdo mal segun la novela el nombre era Laws no Rawls. Una pregunta. Laws era un semielfo, es kain un elfo completo??

the increase in the strength of the cloth is always weird in my opinion, he is very unbalanced. maybe have to wait at the end of the new story he really can be called strong. her life has been controlled by the entity above her for too long, to be honest I don't really like stories like this. maybe it was very interesting at first because I only saw freedom from MC life but after Alaya's arrival the story became unpleasant for me.

yeah I'm back after piling up the chapters, I hope the volume this time is more interesting. I am very bored with repeated breakups with her lover, maybe you can say that I am sick of it, yes I have already read and want to see how this trip ends.

Hmmm

Esa no me la esperaba xD. Pensar que se volvio hijo de la elfa jaja. En que parte de la linea del tiempo esta Kain?