Comments of chapter undefined of Reaching For the Stars

Whats his eye color?? Blue , brown , green?? Hair color????? Specific height????? You kinda just called him tall, 2 inches compared to past life , descriped his features a bit then left it at that

Inner-monolog for three chapters 🤦‍♂️ and the first person style does not help.

the inner monologue and first person doesn't vibe well

no wonder the girl left him he slouched had no muscle to speak of and didnt even know what a smile was considering his face had trouble making one with all this his attitude was probably bad too

keep it up

im glad hes asking the questions that i always ask myself whenever theres a parallel universe, but its not the exact same as the orginal one. like how come everyone did the dirty at the same time and why is the language also the same

Xp

The authors note is meant to be at end of chapter, not interrupting the story every couple sentences Mc was scream g in pain yet no one in house heard, what was his room sound proofed