Comments of chapter undefined of Transcending Paragon

He said he is farvstronger than them both, even on Par with the black bull captain when he spar with him years ago. But now he got tired??!! Man, your power level going haywire...

Yo author, it's a little confusing to read this. Are you writing this with the first person or third person POV? Cause it's hella confusing when you write 'he' referring to the MC then use 'my' for possession. Then you also use 'he' referring to another person without mentioning who is he exactly. I'm sorry but I can't really understand what's going on in the fight. I'm sure you can do better. Fighting

Very stupid

MC isn't really a beta, but just meddling with a minor god complex. He knows the story, so he tries to solve the problems for Cannon MC. It seems like he is doing them a favour but without those problems the Cannon MC's become a much weaker version of their former-selves mentally, which in most cases are the reason for their perseverance and growth. All these fan-boying in fanfics turn them to casual side characters without difficulties so no growth and giving them cheats will only make them less committed. (Last chapter MC saves Asta and Yuno from which I presume is that bullying scene where there competitive rivalry starts. Without that they are now just two people from the same orphanage) I just hope that you remember that this is not black clover and Samshiel is the the MC not Asta. Anyway that is just my opinion and it is your story do as you please.

Well those lone wolf wanna be readers Beta mc? alpha mc? Tsk like relationships and life is just like that

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author A Fantastic Chapter As Always

Thanks for the chapter

Alfa? Lol this is a beta

Isn't he kinda too overpowered, he might even forget his own skills not that I mind

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Thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work like always so don't drop this story and keep up with new chapters and updates

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thanks for the chapter

and dropped get your shit together

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

good chapter

Thanks for the chapter on a good story