Comments of chapter undefined of Transcending Paragon

the author said he doesn't want ro change the plot and then he goes and train asta in his breathing style effectively changing the fucking plot

author u need to get some shit together. why make a dark katana on his belt when he has murasame. you make me want to cry

the only one that i like to asta is his determination i hate his loud voice i hate his "not giving up" personality like wtf just bc you are not giving up you you gonna be wizard king. i hate his "not killing" believe. one day you need to kill to become wizard king this believe is many flaws. and when you ask him "what if you question" need to save Noelle or Rebecca.if you save Noelle, Rebecca gonna die and same way another he will said "i will save them both" you get what im saying author 😤

God the grammer is so bad. Could you use some apps to help you with it? Also some words are missing in sentences. On the other hand, words which doesn't need to be in sentences are there. It is really irritating the hell out of me reading. I can't fully immerse myself when I have to make sense of what you are trying to say or filling in words to make sense of a sentence. Hope you improve.

The only reason asta get grimorie is he ia fucking weak and you train him to be strong but he still get grimorie if is one if the most bullshit thing i ever read he change the plot but act like noting happen no butterfly effect ayyy ****

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Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author A Fantastic Chapter As Always

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mc name so ugly

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