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Comments of chapter undefined of Transcending Paragon

PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

thx for the chap

Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv11Spelloyal

Serius??? A sharingan??? The jade emperor with a sharingan is like a nuclear bomb with a granade. Why every mid/low rate fanfic have an sharingan???

Cerebro
CerebroLv11Cerebro

I don't get why authors always cares about the plot. If you care about the plot don't do fanfic read the original, if you follow plot what is the purpose of your mc he is just an additional unnamed side character with no real purpose.

Qoh
QohLv2Qoh

Why are u treating asta as if he is mc’s master???

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Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

It's good so far, but hope that author wouldn't forget that the emperor abilities is not just sage body ,vital energy manipulation and four foundational force control.. But he also have lots of small stuff that not flashy but still available like his super intelligence that could make him analyse most martial art in a beat and copy or even improve it. That just one of the way he use his mind. He also have lots of abilities that surpass humanity like his eye that could discern even better than sharingan!!! But owh well, hope author would really use Al ltge stuff sage emperor have and use it all. Don't Nerf the OP grandpa power...

Stand_TheWorld777
Stand_TheWorld777Lv3Stand_TheWorld777

Shurasik
ShurasikLv5Shurasik

Thanks for the chapter

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

Pro_Gamer_161
Pro_Gamer_161Lv4Pro_Gamer_161

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author A Fantastic Chapter As Always

Kaneki_Kiyotaka
Kaneki_KiyotakaLv5Kaneki_Kiyotaka

I is fine so far, now don't just make the mc the puppy of Asta, I get you like him but please keep it in check. And don't hesitate to make the mc op, you might think it will ruin the story but you can make it so that the mc fights opponents few levels higher than him that will make for good fight. And try adding a tiny bit of slice of life in it too as you said yourself that you don't like stupid harems so showing the interaction among the characters is important.

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

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RizevimLucifer69
RizevimLucifer69Lv1RizevimLucifer69

Here it is!!!The famed sharingan

Edgelord_Sadboi
Edgelord_SadboiLv4Edgelord_Sadboi

thanks for the chapter

B_Shane_Lensar
B_Shane_LensarLv1B_Shane_Lensar

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Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

👍

Reaper_210
Reaper_210Lv5Reaper_210

Thanks for the chapter

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Venerable_Cat
Venerable_CatLv5Venerable_Cat

Nice~

Shinmatsu
ShinmatsuLv10Shinmatsu

Thanks for the chapter

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story