Comments of chapter undefined of Transcending Paragon

The way this is done is a bit stupid for me but I'll just roll with it. \(￣︶￣*\))

Author when you are so interested in a Story that gives much Screentime for a BIG BIG Harem then the Number 1 story in the Fanfic power ranking is for you!!! ;p

I haven't read last this point and all i want to say is that the reason I like fanfic novels is because I'm sick and tired of mcs who struggle a lot like the original and come out on top because "FRIENDS POWAH" or "I'm the MC biatch" or all hail "PLOT ARMOR" seriously I'm sick of it. I like the MC to be OP as f***, not right away but with little bit effort or more.

hope higher beings dont start showing up all the time and start intervening!

neruto and black clover and the other anime arent really underdogs, if u look at em. naruto is the jinjuriki, an uzummaki who is the son of the 4 th [ one the most talented and powerful people in all of naruto ] and the ninja jesus. srudent of sage and kakashi. he was neglected but not abused, [never mentioned in manga or the LN ], he was just a lucky idiot. Gai or lee are underdogs. naruo is ninja jesus black clover, well... i mean in a world of magic he has anti magic. kimetsu no yaiba....he is also special. Point is dont take em as rolemodels cause each one of em was truly blessed. **: story is interesting but will MC be neutered?

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter

this is rewritten? get an editor mate...

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Thanks for the chapter!

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Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

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