olihanFR
You story seems to have promise but the structure and wording of your sentences can be confusing
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Keep going please đ€©đ
Its very hard to read with the current sentence structure, but i am more than happy that the author is atleast trying to do this much for us who do not speak french.
is the MCs power is like rogue's power but way better because he has conscious control over it and it's way stronger?
