Comments of chapter undefined of In the World of Sword and Magic as Space Marine

Nice and thanks

Thanks for the update my friend and dammm looks like skarbrand got shamed once again haha. I'll be honest with you my dear author if somebody tell me who's chaos god I choose it's khorne because khorne is not a backstabbing god if he tells me his going to kill me he'll do it in front of my skull not in the back. honesty maybe chivalry but the only problem is maniacs bloodlusting muscle head. I know this is heresy I plead for my innocence your excellency . Ave Imperial For The Emperor

Thank you brother, you make the emperors proud.

“Alright time for the paperwork William just like lord Guilloman would have wanted it “ Quote from the ultramarines representative

Hey brother ElJonson can you make a chapter of what is william levels, skill, intelligent, etc

Hey ElJonson if Rana become a Sister of Battle can she make her own Order because i have one now Name:Rana Faction: Sister of Battle Name of the Order: ( Author you can make your own) Lore( Sorry im not good at Lore) In the New world where the Emperor Champion is right now a woman goes by the name Rana is chosen to be a new Holy Host chosen by the God-Emperor of Mankind also she is the Lover of William Nullinais the Chapter Master of the Black Soul and a Archduchess of the new world since she became a Holy Host she can save the Imperium and took command of the Sister of Battle there in the New World she makes her own ordo known as (author suggestion). Name of Ordo: They are the most powerful and Strongest sister of battle in the Imperium and the entire sister of battle there strength can match a Space marine and there faith is so strong that no Chaos could break them. Weapons: Due to rana being the Lover of william he gave Rana some weapon from the STC he have and it is powerful enough to Destroy a space marine armor there weapons are consist of Sword, Shield, Spear and guns Homeworld: None (they are a fleets based consist only 10 ships) Rana flagship is an Emperors class battleship name (insert name here)

Yes yes yes

Thanks for the chapter

I think you should put character growth here by maybe making the prince die from a demon. Make William angry and a bit racist to a demon

Thanks for the chapter. Can't wait to play as Skarbrand in Total War Warhammer 3. I just need a stronger PC.

Ya know, as cool as it sounds in practice, it's never a good idea to pile up various villain factions. Just look at them, its a literal dogpile of various breeds and sizes just biting each other XD

nice!!

Now the most important part rewards!!!!!

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter 😁👍.

Thanks

Thank you brother. The Emperor is pleased.

Thanks for the chapter